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oh! yeah, that's impossible
Other than that, you are gorgeous in this. A beautiful body and face that really makes the whole image work
I keep thinking there is a little bit of a soft focus on your face which is bugging me a little. I know most cameras let you move the little square that it focuses on. Suspect it was left in the middle for this one. Wish it was moved up to be on your eyes. Always better to have the sharp focus right on the model's eyes.
Other than that though, I think it is a pretty good photo. I like how you went with the furry legs and arms as well. Really feel like that helped bring it all together. Feel like it might have been better to reverse the bras between this one and the persona ones. The lacing and such here would have worked well with them and the flat color of that other one would have worked well with the solidness of the fur colors here. That is a pretty minor complaint though. Overall I think it is a pretty solid photo.
I should also say that I like what you have done with your hair. I like how it is falling forward and how long it is. Feel like it really helps the bear feel. I'm also rather enjoying the coloring of it in this one.